2008年1月7日 星期一
The Effects of an Invention or Innovation in Modern Life (1)
The fast development in recent years of the mobile phone, it was already became indispensable technology product to daily life within short time. In early years, mobile phone just be able to do voice communicate or sent messages with someone, but it was not enough to satisfied humanity, and therefore advanced to voice and video communicate. Mobile phone has combine high technology product all of we need, and let us have more convenient in modern life. For example, the council must be face to face when we have not video phone, but cell phone was changed distance of the world, so we can easily to know other person. Also, cell phone can be called private secretary to the person of recent and present times, and following input data to remind us what we want to do. Mobile phone was not just a phone, and has much useful function, pick up the cell phone when we want to enjoy modern life; we did not to carry anymore technology products.
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1.The fast development in recent years of the mobile phone, it was already became indispensable technology product to daily life within short time.
2.yes
3.yes
4.yes. But,maybe that have more example.
5.Cell phone can be called private secretary to the person of recent and present times, and following input data to remind us what we want to do.
6.Maybe yes
7.yes...a little...
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1.Thesis statement -
Mobile phone let us have more
convenient in modern life.
Topic Sentences -
The fast development in recent
years of the mobile phone.
2.Yes, I think so.
3.Yes, it is .
4.I think your examples can more.
5.council example is good.
6.Mobile phone's function.
7.Not bad. But can better.
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